Manuela
by Curt A. Canfield


"I hope that you never lose your idealism and that you never get disappointed or discouraged as you age, liebchen."

The trilogy of books following Will Barnes concludes in this rumination on politics, personal tragedy, and the all-encompassing, overwhelming gravity of receiving a terminal diagnosis. After finishing his second book and forging a relationship with Manuela—the granddaughter he didn't know he had—Will learns from his doctor that he has stage four prostate cancer. Immediately, he is burdened with the question of managing pain, sorting his affairs, and deciding who to inform. On top of this, he must reach out to everyone he based a character on in his book and ensure they have no objections or requests for edits. Some are more receptive than others, but the work must be done in order to ensure there are no problems or liabilities for the book's release.

Revisiting these familiar faces also creates opportunities to discuss current events and the geopolitical climate, including the war between Israel and Palestine. For Will, who has taken in personal stories of World War II veterans and deals with his own trauma from serving in Vietnam, it feels too much like history repeating itself. At the same time, the contents of his second book reveal to Manuela the estranged generational bond between her cherished "Opa" and her father. While Will considers what wisdom he can impart to Manuela before his final days, he learns that she might be the one who inspires him and gives him some things to think about.

Though this book is the third and final novel in the series, its meta-structure as a book about the previous books means that readers will be introduced to all the relevant characters and events through the course of this story alone. As a result, while people and past events will be familiar to long-time readers, the novel can be enjoyed and understood on its own. The discussions of current headlines and conflicts make this a relevant story for the times and give readers plenty of food for thought, while the themes of family, forgiveness, trauma, and mortality have a more timeless familiarity and wisdom. Will's outspoken yet self-aware approach to the people in his life illustrates how disagreements can pit people on opposite sides of an argument, yet respect offered and given maintains the humanity of all parties.

The characters in this book are not written as idealistic caricatures representing one viewpoint or another, but have realistic flexibility and complexity. They accurately reflect what it's like to navigate a climate where people are inundated with rhetoric and have to balance expressing their personal feelings with the sensitivity of coexisting and valuing others who may feel differently. The dialogue is written very artfully to convey this balance and allows the characters to shine and make a strong, lasting impression. For those who have followed Will's story to this point, the degrees of emotional growth and maturity displayed in this book add to the satisfaction of seeing the protagonist evolve over the course of three volumes. Relevant and poignant, the conclusion of this story makes a tremendous impact and provides a proper and complete narrative send-off for Will, his family, and his friends.

Canfield's The Error's of Mankind was a 2025 Eric Hoffer Book Award Category Finalist.

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