Past Oz: Land of the Misbegotten
by Peter Jacob Streitz
Blue Pisces Press


"Like a blind man floundering in a storm-swollen sea, Shields found the two of them drowning in the steaming afterbirth."

From the onset, Streitz transports his audience into a Twilight-Zone-esque reality featuring the enigmatic Maximilian "Shields" Tarry, his doctor and friend, Dr. Les, and Emerald's Bar & Grill, seemingly a place that time has forgotten. As with any bar environment, the banter between Les and Shields is infused with alcohol, and in their inebriated states, the conversations are all over the place. Conjure the image, for instance, of one's doctor coming to a pub specifically to conduct a physical exam, and for this process to be routine. Undoubtedly, this scene sets the tone for suspending belief and allowing the reader to enter into a trancelike state as the conversations between Shields and Les evolve from eccentric to even more eccentric and entertaining.

The imagery of Shields' gruesome head wound that allows the audience to reflect upon the brutal attack he suffered at "Ax" is juxtaposed with an unsettling notion that everything is going to unravel for Shields. In fact, the saying, "get out of your own way," would be perfectly applicable here as Shields loses his grip on reality, determined to facilitate his own undoing. Ironically, it appears that Shields is on the cusp of enormous success, particularly with his "authority over the newest and most powerful computer at Gaylord." Nevertheless, his white-collar, high-tech role does nothing to mask the emptiness that consumes his spirit. In fact, Emerald's Bar is his sanctuary, and a drink is his only soothing mechanism, helping him alter a reality he seeks to flee with reckless abandon.

Interestingly, Streitz's work is experimental to its core, a fusion of sorts between Salvador Dalí's surrealism and Gabriel García Márquez's magical realism. What makes the author's work remarkable is that it primarily features dialogue between Shields and Dr. Les. Though there are numerous stories the conversations reflect on, such as Vinnie (the thorn in Shields' side) growing up, the conversations are still centered on Shields, Les, and Emerald's Bar. It is this structure that creates a rhythmic cadence of sorts, furthering the surreal feeling as the story unfolds. With that said, the chaos on the surface is simply a prelude to the anguish Shields feels knowing that his obstinate commitment to work is directly responsible for not being there for his wife, directly leading to the loss of his child during childbirth, as well as putting his wife in mortal peril.

While the plot itself features conversations between Shields and Les, Streitz's use of sensory detail is unparalleled, bringing characters and moments to life in the most unexpected ways. Further, while using Shields' character arc as the primary lens through which the story is told, the author subtly touches on pertinent themes, including socioeconomic class disparity, gentrification, workplace entitlement, etc.

The ensuing journey for Shields is a torturous one, lived in the mercy of the spirit and the bar, one in which he has simply traversed Past Oz and is on an inevitable collision course with himself and self-destruction. All things considered, Shields' disillusionment with the world and desire to seek what he describes as the ultimate happiness beyond Oz are a powerful driving force that show how a man at the peak of his powers can still feel that his life is devoid of any real meaning. Though countless passages of the work delve into the abstract, the way the text combines masterful storytelling, edge-of-your-seat dialogue, and character development makes for an exhilarating experience that transcends the traditional story arc.

Streitz's No Words... Just News was a 2024 Eric Hoffer Book Award Category Finalist.

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